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What's the point? by =cheshirekazz:iconcheshirekazz:



All your words
Build me up
Make me want to stay
Never leave you behind

You say I’m strong
You admire the way
I stand against the world
And bow to no man

But I’m at your feet begging to be seen
Pleading for your love
Pathetically needing you

The one thing you didn’t expect
That its possible that I may
Just be strong enough
To walk away.

Explain away
Why you’re never around
Always so quiet
Can’t say what you feel

Where’s my assurance
That it’s us all the way?
Why do I work so hard
And not walk away?

I’m at your feet begging to be seen
Pleading for your love
Pathetically needing you

Why work so hard
To be with the one you love
If they only want you when you’re there?
©2008 =cheshirekazz
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A song I wrote a bit ago... still need to come up with the music.

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~BowmanKestrel:iconBowmanKestrel: Apr 14, 2008, 2:07:02 PM
Fantastic! :glomp:
I was wondering... when you're writing the song, do you already have the rythm in your head or do you think of it later? 8D
Random question... xD

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~Eternal-Lullaby:iconEternal-Lullaby: Apr 14, 2008, 9:54:17 PM
Beautiful.
Also heartbreaking.

:hug:

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=cheshirekazz:iconcheshirekazz: Apr 15, 2008, 7:23:45 AM
I tend to think of it later...

unless the band already has a song written... and then i think up words to go with it.

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